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Missing Piece
Contributed by
Jeshka
on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 08:04:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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I feel broken inside
Crumbled to pieces on the ground
Put me together, Please!
I know pieces have gone away
But please do the best you can
Youre all I need; Youre all I've got...
You piece me together with such precision
Such grace
Cause to You I was already beautiful
You can't improve perfection
Parts of me are missing
But You make me whole
Whole I want to stay
And without You I will surely fade away...
So keep me in one piece
Alive and well, happy and thankful
Guide me and love me
Because You are my missing piece.
Copyright ©
Jeshka
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2007-01-15 20:04:32]
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Re: Missing Piece
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 01:00:02 PM AEST
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Strangely enough this poem 'completes me'
A very sweet write,
But to quote some stand-up sisters:
"Girl you don't need no man, you don't need no one to make you whole but you."
Might as well get that now and grow into yourself as in all things 'change' is the only constant.
Good Job
Peace
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Re: Missing Piece
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 11:42:21 AM AEST
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| A very clever ending to a very meaningful piece! |
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