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Whatever

Contributed by tiggytom on Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 12:07:53 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

27, now I'm at the age of realisation
looking back at my life with thoughts of elation
of how I envisioned myself to be
with no thought of illusion I feel I'm deceived
broken spirit with family adrift
no care for my feelings, no time to be sick

For now I am older, I have to believe
that somewhere i'll follow the devil beneath
temptations they come so easily
taking hold of my body, my heart it will grieve
feeling lost in my hollow repentive beliefs

That day will come on my way to the sun
looking back on my history realising the fun
this life which we're given we have to believe
we are here for a reason
so they'd have you believe

A war mongering people is what we've become
putting trust in our brother, those holding the guns
without hearing our father, the son of the one

Still, we will believe we are free
without caring or knowing of what lies beneath
beneath our skin, trouble hidden within

If I believe what I'm told this wont matter to me
for now I will listen to what I am told
sitting back in my prison and watch the whole world evolve

Copyright © tiggytom ... [ 2007-01-15 12:07:53]
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Re: Whatever (User Rating: 1 )
by Alex23 on Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 12:17:46 PM AEST
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Wow! Great write. I like the hazy realization style here. Deep and emotional. Good job!

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