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His Rainbow Rose
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 08:42:51 AM in AEST
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Her beauty was beyond compare
Auburn with gold streaked hair
As she worked in her garden her eyes true
One emerald green the other sapphire blue
Her flowers she tended with loving care
He knew he could always find her there
His Rainbow Rose is what he called her
He knew his heart belonged to no other
Rare was her spirit and beauty fair
He thought she would always be there
But illness her body claimed
No one could be blamed
His heart now empty full of gloom
He walked to the garden to look at the blooms
All the roses were now shriveled and old
Except for one rose the colors of the rainbow
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Re: His Rainbow Rose
(User Rating: 1 ) by yangdantien on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 08:52:02 AM AEST (User
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A sadness but so much energy given to cultivation that the one outstanding fruit of her labors brings back all the years of loving beauty...
Well Done
Peace
Yang |
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Re: His Rainbow Rose
(User Rating: 1 ) by needledancing on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 09:17:44 AM AEST (User
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I can tell that love was in the poets heart. I also know that peace was given from the beyond by that one rainbow rose. Healing the wounds of the now alone lover. Good poem |
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Re: His Rainbow Rose
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 11:39:03 AM AEST (User
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Bittersweet, Shari. Left me teary eyed.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: His Rainbow Rose
(User Rating: 1 ) by Clarity_Rising on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 11:55:49 AM AEST (User
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This poem is bittersweet. I really like
the way you describe physical attributes,
you make them all sound so beautiful.
Excellent write!
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Re: His Rainbow Rose
(User Rating: 1 ) by Alex23 on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 12:07:30 PM AEST (User
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I don't mean to bo with the flow...but it's very bittersweet! I loved this one primarily due to the emotions, and being that I know how hard it is to lose someone. But, alas, there is always a comfort zone in life...in here, that one rainbow rose. Awesome job! |
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Re: His Rainbow Rose
(User Rating: 1 ) by EddieDean on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 01:58:28 PM AEST (User
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Another great write, but oh so sad. I can imagine him walking in the garden, tears in his eyes, until he sees the rainbow roses. Very good work yet again, keep it up!
mike |
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