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Crystal Roses
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 08:40:02 AM in AEST
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From her tower high she watched
The dragon fly overhead
Knowing her love might die
Trying to rescue her from its grasp
Crystal was the towers walls
High on a mountain
Overlooking the ocean
With every tear she cried
A crystal rose would form below
Would her love know the truth?
Of the roses clear and pure
For only they could pierce
The dragons armor strong
For of love they were bound
Many knights and princes
Tried to free the princess fair
They could not see with their hearts
The truth of the roses crystal power
Until an odd little man came along
With a heart so very true
Not much to look at was he
Small of stature and scarred
From life’s struggles
But he felt with his heart
And pieced the dragons armor
With the roses and his loving nature
The princess saw with her heart
This man handsome beyond compare
For his spirit was that of one pure
A love for all creatures of the earth
So she spent her life happily
With her love so true
No more to shed tears
Of
Crystal Roses
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NoSaint
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Re: Crystal Roses
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by needledancing on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 09:20:43 AM AEST
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| A good mystical symbolism of love and finding love . Nicely done |
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Re: Crystal Roses
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 11:42:38 AM AEST
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Shari, that was a lovely piece with such a wonderful ending. (this one made me smile)
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Crystal Roses
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by Clarity_Rising on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 12:04:56 PM AEST
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This poem reminds me of medieval
lore. Excellent use of imagery. The
story in this poem is really touching.
Great write!
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Re: Crystal Roses
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by EddieDean on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 01:55:59 PM AEST
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Not much to look at was he
Small of stature and scarred
From life’s struggles
But he felt with his heart
And pieced the dragons armor
With the roses and his loving nature
The princess saw with her heart
This man handsome beyond compare
If only people today would look inside people before they make opinions of them, not just take in their looks and judge right off the bat.
Good work, I really enjoyed reading this one, can't wait for the next.
mike |
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Re: Crystal Roses
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 04:48:41 PM AEST
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You take into the time and mind of when now myths filled the skies and such jewels procured as to shed tears of crystal roses. How delicious.
Bravo
Peace
Yangdantien |
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