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Imagination
Contributed by
Andrew93093
on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 10:34:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I see you at your location
I am yelling in frustration
I am feeling that sensation
I am feeling that temptation
I can't stop my admiration
I am losing concentration
I would die for conversation
I look at you in desperation
When I try to offer an explanation
All I come to is hesitation
So all I can do in isolation
Is watch you in fascination
You are my inspiration
You are my motivation
You're the reason for my relaxation
You're the reason for my determination
My love is only a manifestation
It is going under intensification
You are my rejuvenation
Our love needs amplification
I have seen you in observation
You have come to realization
Our love is in activation
Too bad this is only my imagination
Copyright ©
Andrew93093
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2007-01-14 22:34:37]
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Re: Imagination
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by Kellros on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 11:04:14 PM AEST
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| Wow... interesting rhyme indeed. Good write! :) |
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Re: Imagination
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by Clarity_Rising on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 11:48:16 PM AEST
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This is a very sweet poem.
Unrequited love is a tiresome
journey we will all travel upon
on one point in our life. Best
of wishes!
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Re: Imagination
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 05:28:09 AM AEST
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| excellent poem, you've done a great job here |
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Re: Imagination
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by Drapes on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 12:17:03 PM AEST
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Oh this is great! I love how all the words rhyme! Great word choice, musta been hard to come up with all those! Nice write - and I feel it, I know where you're coming from.
-Drapes |
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Re: Imagination
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by whome on
Sunday, 6th April 2008 @ 06:23:44 PM AEST
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| A magnificent effort. brilliant effort in rhyming |
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