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Lady Godiva
Contributed by
clarity_rising
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Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 09:58:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
political
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I am Lady Godiva
A martyr to the feminist cause,
I stand naked now before you,
With neither embarrassment nor shame.
For I am beautiful,
And so are you.
Why then, my fellow daughter of Eve
Do you hide your face from humanity?
Fear not the lies of temptation
Jealous men construct to bind your soul.
Within you holds a power
No man can ever break.
I, Lady Godiva,
Now remove your veil of darkness,
Stand naked with me before the world,
With neither embarrassment nor shame,
For you are beautiful,
And so am I.
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clarity_rising
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Re: Lady Godiva
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by CuriousitysCat on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 10:11:53 PM AEST
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Definately some righteous poetry! I love the political taint and the questioning as a head figure. This poem has acheived the statement I have assumed to be sought after.
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Re: Lady Godiva
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 12:05:26 PM AEST
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much wisdom here
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Re: Lady Godiva
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by wizard on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 10:07:01 PM AEST
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very nicely done... if this were to be an instance that actually took place, society would be much better off...
a great write, your message is clear and your words flow beautifully...
wiz |
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Re: Lady Godiva
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 10:22:50 PM AEST
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This is the first of your writes that I have read and I gotta say I'm quite impressed. I will be definately visiting your pages to read the rest of your wonderful poetry. Well done and thanks so much for sharing your work with us.
warm hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Lady Godiva
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 12:56:37 AM AEST
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It is well composed poem with lot of self-esteem in it;
Keep the good work going my friend.
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Re: Lady Godiva
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 07:08:15 PM AEST
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This is like a vision of wisdom and comfort that appears to one who is in deep soul distress. I may not be a " fellow daughter of Eve" ( I love that line) but I am a fellow lover of poetry and this is exceptional writing.
Very well done
Roses
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Re: Lady Godiva
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by whome on
Sunday, 6th April 2008 @ 12:08:42 PM AEST
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| Simple but extremely beautiful. Very well written. |
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