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Burning Eyes

Contributed by exiled on Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



the woman i love stayed the night with me and this was the result. her and i are closer than ever now and within 5 months our love will just grow stronger. i would just like some words of encouragement from someone to help me because it is really getting hard to resist and i can't cave into her because all it will do is cause more problems and i don't want her stressed even if it means i must hurt for it. i would go through life suffering if she could just have one pain free unbroken day full of nothing but her beautiful smile. that is how i feel. well if anyone cares to know more pm me or e-mail me i really need help with this dilemna, and i feel as if i can talk to any one of you. i need to tell someone the story in it's full form. i need a release. (exiled)



(Burning Eyes)

Burning so ever brightly,
Your eyes are before mine,
Should I utter the words you yearn to hear,
or should i turn away in fear,
covering all of my tears,
should i gather my pain,
and bring it before you,
or shoud I wait,
To show you what is held so dear,
My heart now pounding,
sweat in the palms of my hands,
then you speak,
what i never thought i would hear,
i love you with all of my heart,
the words spoken from your mouth,
i know we would have a great life,
my heart beats faster,
it feels as if it is going to explode,
knowing the things that i was just told,
i cannot believe this,
it is all so unreal,
could this just be a dream,
then i realize,
there is more to this than me,
he is still in the picture,
she cannot get him out of her head,
she does not want to hurt me
wants to get him out of her life,
before she enters mine once again,
she says she regrets nothing,
not a single moment with me,
looks at me and speaks of us having a fling,
i don't know what to say,
my mind rushing with the wind,
what can i do,
i love her, i will right up until my end,
she is my everything,
without her i am just a barren land,
burining so ever brightly,
your eyes are before mine,
as i look at you and deny,
and realize this is not the end,
soon enough our child will be born,
he will be gone,
and we will be reunited once again.

(exiled)









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Re: Burning Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 08:27:15 PM AEST
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Oh, the toiled webs we weave. Make sure who you are doing this for, is it for her, for the both of you or for you. Be careful.


Re: Burning Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 01:57:03 AM AEST
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this is a lovely poem. i would gladly help you if you still need it. pm me if you wanna talk.
your friend,
kara




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