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Clarity
Contributed by
CuriousitysCat
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Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 11:25:21 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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I've yet to figure out who I am completely
That I am only me
And I can't ever quite fully see
This fact; though I try hard
Now I have shed those wonderful tears yet again
The other night it was
And it felt so good; though I was feeling so bad
It seems I've been lifted because
I am so sad
I've yet to find someone who appreciates me
For all that I tend to be; It's okay; They just don't understand completely
It's amazing; the things you see with a
Little bit of clarity
I feel so high
The greatest part about it is it has come
Naturally
Not forced or induced
I know it'll go away
It never lasts that long
But nevertheless
I'll always enjoy the times
It feels so good to be me
Shaking; as all of it mixes inside
I feel so alive; Really
This good sadness has brought me back
A bit more
As my head is decongested
And it's amazing the things you
See in those moments of clarity
Things may not be simple
But it's great to truely see
And love the times when it feels so
Good to be me...
~JaZz
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CuriousitysCat
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2007-01-14 11:25:21]
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Re: Clarity
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by yangdantien on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 11:57:08 AM AEST
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Excellent and it stands up for you, holding true...
May the 'Clarity' remain and ever come 'naturally.'
Peace
Yang |
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Re: Clarity
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by xxthexforgotenxonexx on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 11:58:27 AM AEST
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i can really relate to this peiece, people try to be what they're not and they strugle over something as useless as to impress someone when ever they had the option to be themselves the whole time, whenever your happy by impressing someone else never compares with being happy with yourself,while being yourself is sometimes hard because most people dont fit in the majority, it pays off in the end to be completely honest about who you are.....i loved it
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Re: Clarity
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by shelby on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 06:26:04 PM AEST
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Be yourself the rest will follow. Those who are true blue love you just as you are the rest need to go jump in a ditch full of stinky water LOL...... Sorry... anyway if you come to the point where you find clarity you have risen above many things. Your write shows your inner self thus making it wonderful.
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Re: Clarity
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by MisfitMe on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 11:11:29 PM AEST
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I'm just a quotin' fool tonight, but more than anything, this has got Elton runnin' through my head...
"When it feels so good,to hurt so bad...
& suffer just enough to sing the blues"
BigLoveBabez
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