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a bullet from some one special
Contributed by
egg
on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 04:34:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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a bullet from some one special
ive lost my way
from were i laughed
all i do now is cry
i am so sick of this sadness
death is the painless soution
this life has been so over rated
help me out coz
i cant take it
i cant shake it
its taking me over
drowning me from the inside
im longing for a solution
im so sick of
all this fighting
always running
and always feeling the pain from you
this is my problem
your the first thing i remember
the last thing on my mind
and so far away
i cant grasp
my hopes
all turned to lies
as you thow it all away
you broke me once
then you came again twice
plz god let me be the last victim
of this heartache ...
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2007-01-14 04:34:18]
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Re: a bullet from some one special
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 10:30:00 AM AEST
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The Pain and frustration is quite evident in this poem, our poet friend has visualized the agony of a man who has been Deprived of love.
Good write.
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Re: a bullet from some one special
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by Shattered_soul on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 11:56:49 AM AEST
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Pain hurts
and it happens
but to die
creats pain for friends
and family around you
*thats the only reason I havent ended my own fantastic life i live*
I hope you get through your downs
and pick yourself up
because though people may help
no one else will pick you up
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