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Contributed by
crow
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Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 11:18:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Silhouettes of the past
lost in minutes
reading yesterdays.
Visit the corner,
dreams and memories
like discarded wrappers.
So fragile the layers
golden rules,
here in the den of
dues, and do not.
Smile at my leisure,
I forget your not there,
unguarded heart,
messages sent,
vacant names.
I`ll never stop,
silly me,
dry the eyes
the bell tolls.
Missing
with gain,
missing
with fall
Just let me lay here
thoughts are like wine..
letters of sorrow..
© Copyright 2006 Vincent
Copyright ©
crow
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2007-01-13 23:18:58]
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Re: Letters
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by shelby on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 11:21:17 PM AEST
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Oh.....
this is moving my friend. Emotions run deep within this one.
hugsssss
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Letters
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 11:46:51 PM AEST
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Really excellent rhythm...
I sipped upon:
"...thoughts are like wine..."
Wisdom wafts from each read.
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: Letters
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 07:26:46 AM AEST
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brought forth many emotions...well written
Shari |
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Re: Letters
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 06:35:25 PM AEST
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An emotionally powered write that tugs at the heart strings. You have written this well.
Well done and thanks for sharing it with us.
warm hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Letters
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 09:28:38 PM AEST
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"dreams and memories
like discarded wrappers."
Kind of reminds me of a poem about popcorn left on a theatre floor.. kind of.
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Re: Letters
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by brew on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 02:22:06 PM AEST
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Just take the better path to that heart that has been turmoiled, and make it known it can get better......Such sentiment in this write.....I hope it gets better and happiness will prevail.
Brew~ |
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Re: Letters
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by NDean on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 07:34:29 AM AEST
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Loved reading this. It flowed from stanzas similar to Haikus into longer stanzas that makes it seem like a flowing river.
Ace
Nathan |
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Re: Letters
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 02:50:11 AM AEST
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| very moving write |
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Re: Letters
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 01:19:59 PM AEST
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| This style of seemilngly chopped lines here really lends to the impact of emotions. A very powerful piece you have here!! |
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Re: Letters
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 02:31:29 PM AEST
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beautiful:)
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Letters
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 11:17:04 AM AEST
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OH wow, vincent. You painted a picture in my mind . . .
I could see a person, kneeling in a dim attic, lit only by
a small stretch of sunlight cascading through a dormer
window . . .letters in their hand and a single tear rolling
down one cheek. Obviously flooded by memory . . .
exceptional. Beautiful and wondrous and soooooo very emotive.
~Breezy |
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