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He Is No Romeo
Contributed by
drapes
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Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 08:06:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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HE IS NO ROMEO.
But my eyes are nevertheless drawn to him.
HE LACKS CREATIVITY.
But grabs my attention unlike any other.
HE FAILS TO BE TRUTHFUL.
But never could a lie dwell in those eyes.
HE CANNOT BACK HIS TALK.
But I long to hear the meaningless words.
HE HAS NO GRACE.
But if there was ever an attractive stumble...
HE LIVES TO PLEASE HIMSELF
But a change would occur, I believe, in time.
HE IS LESS THAN PERFECT
But my connotation of the word is diverse.
HE IS NO HERO.
But my helper, my back-up, my hero.
HE IS LESS THAN ALL.
But the only one that I need to complete.
HE IS PLAINLY NOTHING.
But love can overturn, destroy, that statement.
1.13.07
"Another one... be proud"
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drapes
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2007-01-13 20:06:54]
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Re: He Is No Romeo
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by LockedIllusions on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 08:14:44 PM AEST
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| wow I truely love this poem.I feel very much this way with the love of my life thank you! |
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Re: He Is No Romeo
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by Crow on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 09:28:06 PM AEST
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| this is excellent work, I`m so suprised you don`t have a ton of comments on this. How in the world did you slip through the cracks here! I`m telling my friends, once again good read, I enjoyed it...Crow |
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Re: He Is No Romeo
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 09:39:52 PM AEST
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Wow! what talent .....impressive
Shari |
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Re: He Is No Romeo
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 02:51:56 PM AEST
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Oh my. this was...AWESOME. Can we have a round of applause for drapes and her lovely poem? *clapping* Thank you...
But this poem is so true. I love the "But if there was ever an attractive stumble..."
That part was so cute. Great job!!
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