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Lost and Alone
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 11:03:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Sad man
Unshaven
Unkempt
Ambling along
Holding your sign
They call you
Beggar
Bum
Wino
Drunk
I simply call you...
a brother
Lost
You need attention
You need love
Stolen by lost dreams
That forever go untold
Cold cruel world
What reasons do we walk
on such tortured ground...
unnoticed
Alone
Written after my encounter with numerous homeless persons whilst in
San Diego, California.
California is going through a cold snap right now....bless those who have no warmth or shelter. My heart is crying.
Laura Horner
Penned 12-06
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Re: Lost and Alone
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 11:22:36 AM AEST
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Your heart shines brightly here
We must always remember those who need us
Shari |
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Re: Lost and Alone
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by ever1der on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 12:40:50 PM AEST
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"Stolen by lost dreams
That forever go untold"
I love those lines Laura. This tugs at my heart...(hugs you tight and cries) |
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Re: Lost and Alone
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by shelby on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 01:11:02 PM AEST
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Your heart is so large and full of compassion for all this is a beautiful write. I have also found myself thinking of all of those people out in this cold this winter.
Michelle |
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Re: Lost and Alone
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 01:44:07 PM AEST
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Your heart strikes a chord that is distinctly strum in mine. I actually feel inspired this Happy Saturday.
There are so many who seek to survive and live in whatever regards their abilities flow. Your piece invokes a resistance within me.
A will of debate unfurls and I realize much in this, partly due to points of view in flux.
Excellent , Thank You
Peace
AJ |
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Re: Lost and Alone
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by xXdeadXpoetXx on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 05:16:09 PM AEST
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| definitly good. i feel for hobos. rock on!! |
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Re: Lost and Alone
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by Ruby2sdy on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 06:49:40 PM AEST
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so many people turn their back; I'm glad that there are those who don't.
Tuesday x |
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Re: Lost and Alone
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by MisfitMe on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 08:17:41 PM AEST
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" We are all mirrors unto one another
within the reflective depths of unmet eyes..."
~Me
Thank you for not leaving these eyes unmet... |
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Re: Lost and Alone
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by Crow on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 10:35:07 PM AEST
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| we all need to be more aware, people go hungry in this country, and cold. love the write. Crow |
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Re: Lost and Alone
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by HoneyCat on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 11:54:17 PM AEST
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| it brings my heart to tears. this poem is so telling. thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Lost and Alone
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by HoneyCat on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 11:54:22 PM AEST
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| it brings my heart to tears. this poem is so telling. thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Lost and Alone
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 07:57:18 PM AEST
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Your beautiful, compassionate, loving heart shines throughout this write my dear friend. My heart & prayers go out to all those needy people out there. Your write pulls deep at the heart strings and brings tears to fill my eyes.
Sue *hugs* Laura tight.
much love, hugs & prayers
sue m |
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Re: Lost and Alone
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 11:31:17 AM AEST
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whoa. this breaks my heart. that is so sad. i love your honesty and the way you depict things for what they are. you have a huge heart and i respect that. it makes me happy to see that you have remembered these people in such a way....
awesome
-Nat :) |
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Re: Lost and Alone
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 10:55:47 AM AEST
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Ah Laura,
Again I see your empathy and compassion expressed so competently in your poetry. The emotion and pain is so heartfelt and genuine. It really reflects your loving and caring nature, so artfully penned.
Well done my friend,
Will |
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Re: Lost and Alone
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 11:47:04 AM AEST
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Nicely written. Compassion for the homeless is needed for we that have will never know the true meaning of why they chose to be alone. Lost and without a home so many here,there and everywhere. Thank goodness for folks that assit where they can to provide aide and comfort unconditionally.
Whisper |
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Re: Lost and Alone
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 12:00:26 PM AEST
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| This shows the sunshine in your soul, a piece well done! |
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Re: Lost and Alone
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 04:27:47 PM AEST
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Oh sweetie...sometimes I believe that your heart is somehow bigger than the world...
This is terrible in it's simplicity. You do not need any more than what you have written for it to strike a nerve...
A good write hun, incredibly powerful, and important.
Much love,
Phil xxx |
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Re: Lost and Alone
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 12:40:36 PM AEST
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A very compassionate write... The love that you have for others shines through your poems... Great poem..
Take care
Christina |
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