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untitled
Contributed by
idkwhatimdoing5
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Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 08:01:30 PM in AEST
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A dream. A winter’s day in a far off city. The snow mixes with the lights of the buildings in some sad, poetic looking way. I am alone in this land of steal and snow, but my love for her drives me and keeps me warm. I have never seen her face, and yet she is the most beautiful thing I’ve ever experienced. She is substance – even if only in my mind. The ruler of my dreams – the ruler of this city, you haunt me.
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Re: untitled
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by Alex23 on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 03:01:07 AM AEST
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| I really liked this. It really made me think of how certain places and environments can create powerful emotions only found through experience. This is a tough one to name..it should remain untilted in my opinion. Great write though! |
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Re: untitled
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by Imitacioneo on
Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 04:49:52 PM AEST
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| great way to write. It really should be untitled because its like a summation of the exhilirating emotions you feel when you can explain why something or someone makes you soooo happy!!!! |
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Re: untitled
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by longhaircg on
Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 06:04:22 PM AEST
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| I liked it nice writing |
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