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In Twilight Days
Contributed by
sararose1950
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Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 05:03:34 PM in AEST
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In twilight days,
we sing, we dance;
In twilight nights,
here lays our chance.
In twilight days,
we love, we dream;
In twilight nights,
here hides the scheme.
In twilight days,
we hope, we fear;
In twilight nights,
here far is near.
In twilight days,
we reach, we bend;
In twilight nights,
here dwells our end.
In twilight days,
we fly, set sail;
In twilight nights,
souls weave the tale.
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sararose1950
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2007-01-12 17:03:34] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: In Twilight Days
(User Rating: 1 ) by yangdantien on
Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 10:19:00 PM AEST (User
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The use of repetition is effective and lyrical. Keep writing as there is a depth of soul ringing through these words.
Good Job
Peace
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