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A Letter from Isolde
Contributed by
clarity_rising
on
Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 12:41:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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We are more than love potions,
And speckled scattered stars,
We are forever, we are eternity,
Do not leave me, do not leave me,
My hands are white,
I am innocent.
Oh Tristan, my Tristan,
I saw the white sails
Amongst a sea of clouds.
But they all turned to black,
They turned to black.
For you are gone,
And I am here,
Singing sweet lullabies
To the lonely wind.
Come to me,
Why won’t you come to me?
We are more than love potions,
And speckled scattered stars,
We are forever, we are eternity,
Do not leave me, do not leave me,
My hands are white,
I am innocent.
Oh Tristan, my Tristan,
The king is not here
In our woodland palace
Of ivy and trees.
He is but a distant dream,
A distant dream.
For he is gone,
And I am here,
Writing woeful words
To my lamenting love,
Come to me,
Why won’t you come to me?
We are more than love potions,
And speckled scattered stars,
We are forever, we are eternity,
Do not leave me, do not leave me,
My hands are white,
I am innocent-
We are innocent.
And you are gone,
Yes, you are gone.
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Re: A Letter from Isolde
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 02:15:03 PM AEST
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I think this could make a very good song. strong lyrics.
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Re: A Letter from Isolde
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 05:27:56 PM AEST
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I enjoyed the old world feel to this tragic tale you have so poetically penned here. I could imagine it being sung in a Shakespearian type play.
Very well done
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Re: A Letter from Isolde
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by CuriousitysCat on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 10:30:19 AM AEST
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Right on, I really enjoyed watching the movie of Tristan and Isolde as well as doing a little research on the mythology. Anywho this song rightfully explains the connection between the two. Though I am not personally well inclined with talent towards writing lyrics, I can see you may be.
KeEp WrItInG
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Re: A Letter from Isolde
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 02:54:55 PM AEST
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Dearest Clarity the more I read of your captivating & intriguing poetry, the more I get hooked. You are a very gifted writer not only in poetry , but in song writing too. You have scored yourself another fan. You go girl~
big warm huggers from across the blue~
sue m |
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