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No one else
Contributed by
kishdaswani
on
Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 02:22:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There are a thousand guys wealthier than i.....
..... none would treasure you more
There are a thousand guys better looking than i .....
...... none would only gaze upon your 'morning' beauty
There are a thousand guys nicer than i .....
...... none would support your dreams
There are a thousand guys sweeter than i ....
.... none would run through the midnight streets looking fot that chocolate cake
There are a thousand guys tougher than i ....
.... none would hold you safe in their arms
I would.....
I am not perfect,
I am not extraordinary,
I am not magnificent......
I am me .... and you....
You are my hopes,
My dreams,
The rainfall on my dessert,
My perfect addiction,
The sublime creation of perfection,
No one else shall i seek,
My life would be bleak,
Without this gift,
That i shall lift,
Announcing to the doves .....
..... My one and greatest love.
Copyright ©
kishdaswani
... [
2007-01-12 02:22:11]
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Re: No one else
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 02:59:58 PM AEST
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Interesting format. Original - good!
Very sweet, I love the way you describe how you care. And I know very well the feeling behind this poem... best wishes to you with this situation!
Good job!
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Re: No one else
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 03:00:35 PM AEST
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Interesting format. Original - good!
Very sweet, I love the way you describe how you care. And I know very well the feeling behind this poem... best wishes to you with this situation!
Good job!
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