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Aladdin’s Lamp
Contributed by
twinkletoes
on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 11:20:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I will forever love you,
in my heart and in my mind.
Together we know the secrets,
of the time we have that binds-us closer than the others,
those ones who eat our wills,
and when I die I need no heaven,
cause angel I've had my fill!
I could dilly-dally
all day and all the night
with words that spruk and flatter-but that would not seem right.
With constant repetition, of acts that seem to you,
acts of myth and folly
and times are too few.
But as uncut as a diamond
as a scraggy Gidyea tree
I have always dreamed, there was
hope for you and me-like Romeo and Juliette
or Taylor and ol' Burton.
the only way they ever split
was to draw the final curtain.
You dream on in your cosmos
I look for Aladdin’s lamp
but there ain't no magic carpet
nor any genuine stamp-to this wretched life
well, that is how it seems.
But baby one thing’s certain;
We both have the greatest dreams.
Copyright ©
twinkletoes
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2007-01-11 23:20:59]
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Re: Aladdin’s Lamp
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 17th April 2007 @ 02:11:44 PM AEST
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hey twinkles:) im so happy to read another of your brilliant poems! your talent always shines and here is no exception, this is ~:*beautiful*:~
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Aladdin’s Lamp
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 19th December 2007 @ 11:00:13 AM AEST
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Some great imagery in this and an imaginative use of the language.
"spruk".........must remember that one !!
Steve |
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