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Senseless Nonsense
Contributed by
drapes
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Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 06:16:41 PM in AEST
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Screaming whispers cowardly bold,
Silent words remain untold.
Notes of truth are creased with lies
Of false confession’s bitter cry.
Frozen heartbeats chill the flame
Of a burning passion’s empty blame.
A sour kiss to sweet revenge,
A plan in mind, just pretend.
Paralyzed movement, spinning still,
Paused in motions calming shrill.
Soothing torture, tears of stone,
Hidden exposure still unknown.
A blazing rhythm’s wilting strain,
Sober drunkenness, loss of gain.
Honest craze does cure the sin,
And the end of nothing will begin.
Copyright ©
drapes
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2007-01-11 18:16:41]
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Re: Senseless Nonsense
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by yangdantien on
Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 12:41:50 PM AEST
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This piece is filled with takes and double takes and a fine metric of rhyme revealing "Senseless Nonsense"
Good Job
Keep Writing...
Peace
Yangdantgien |
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Re: Senseless Nonsense
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 02:57:27 PM AEST
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| Beautiful. I loved the way the words just flowed and the rhyming was amazing. I really like this poem. YAY! Awesome job. *thumbs up* |
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