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Flickering Image
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
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Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 03:00:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Who is she?
The image, flickering and transparent,
Jumping in and out of existence.
She's there, printed on slanted windows,
Surrounded by darkness, bright lights.
A shadow, perhaps?
An echo, distant unclear memories,
Dissolved in city noise.
Who is that girl?
Dark eyes staring into mine.
Why can't I remember her name?
Copyright ©
xXxmegsxXx
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2007-01-11 15:00:22]
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Re: Flickering Image
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by xXdeadXpoetXx on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 03:11:34 PM AEST
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| extremely beautiful! u heart this poem! |
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Re: Flickering Image
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 05:44:25 PM AEST
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I like this it read as if there was a breeze in the dark sputtering candlelights to understanding the path of the question left unanswered.
Well Done
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: Flickering Image
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by Clarity_Rising on
Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 01:43:54 PM AEST
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| What a lovely description of internal struggling. I hope that you are able to find yourself once again. Great write!!! |
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