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Last Tear
Contributed by
devils_denial
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Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 09:58:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I want my life to expire,
Burned away slowly like a book thrown into the fire,
Tonight is the night,
To give into my perpetual fight,
You make me feel so irate,
Let me succumb to my fate,
Succumb to my untimely death,
I'd accept nothing less,
To you, I must be a curse,
Guess what, the drugs just made me feel worse,
After my first blaze, I wanted more and more,
No look I'm paralysed puking up all over my bedroom floor,
My life is what I continually hate,
I can't even wipe clean my slate,
I've now got to make a choice,
So hear my poetic voice,
I have chosen to say goodbye,
My life will now fade away and die,
Finally I've decided to succumb to my biggest fear,
You won't even have a chance to wipe away your lonely son's last tear,
By Jay Basey © 2005
Copyright ©
devils_denial
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2007-01-11 09:58:25]
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Re: Last Tear
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by BrokenSavior on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 11:23:33 AM AEST
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| My heart goes out to this person you write about in this poem. The sadness and pain is very alive in this write. |
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Re: Last Tear
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 12:11:01 PM AEST
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this is a beautifully tragic write.. you can feel the pain and sadness in this piece.. it has a very good flow to it.. thanks for sharing
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