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Rotting Circle
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 09:08:54 AM in AEST
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Broken silence
Left to die
Under muddy feet
Trails of yesterday
Morbid curiosity
As crowds wander by
See lost souls
Broken promises
Who could save?
This lost waif
From Satan’s hell
Deserted Young
Too late now
For his soul
Gone in moment
No values
Winter snow
Falls on grave
Metal coffin beneath
Hope dashed
Mother weeps
Holds son close
Father gone
Rotten circle repeats
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NoSaint
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2007-01-11 09:08:54]
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Re: Rotting Circle
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 10:17:16 AM AEST
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Wow Shari, That seemed so painful to me when I read it. I could feel the chill of that frozen ground and the winter air. Fantastic how you can take someone inside your words.
Thanks for sharing. Peace,
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Re: Rotting Circle
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 10:31:03 AM AEST
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'Rotten circle repeats...'
That rolled around my head for a while and made me think of 'generational' behaviors that are pretty rotten...
Good Job
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: Rotting Circle
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 12:25:06 PM AEST
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wow this is a very sad write but its so powerful and the wording is exquiste.. I really enjoyed this piece..
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Rotting Circle
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by shelby on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 03:16:29 PM AEST
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How true it is my friend, nicely written.
~Michelle~ |
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