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Your Last Journey

Contributed by BOZEEN on Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 12:08:21 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

First we must thank GOD for allowing us to have you in our lives,as we try to
understand or make sense of death,we must remember that you played a
very important role in our lives,you reminded us that as we travel down the road
of life we must beware of falling rocks,we must remember to keep him close and wear GOD'S suit of
armor,because those rocks will fall heavy on you,sadly you did not wear your
suit,so as you traveled through life your body was beating down over and over
until you could not take the pain anymore,but that's ok because GOD was waiting
with open arms,you have finished your journey of life,you now sit with GOD as he
cleanses your soul,heart and feet,GOD has put his hand over you and healed all
your wounds,as we mourn our loss and say we wish you were here or that we
could speak with you, let's remember that you are home now and that you will
alway's be in our hearts and spirits,so rest now because your walk is over and
there will be no more pain for you.

Copyright © BOZEEN ... [ 2007-01-11 00:08:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Your Last Journey (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Wednesday, 21st March 2007 @ 07:37:23 AM AEST
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I enjoy your work very much..I tend to refer to God as my universe or the universe as it seems to calm the reader in terms of being multi God orientated or dead set against God...if you inject the universe in here it is a beautiful piece that truly speaks to all....and God told me that this was a okay to refer to him/her as such
..can I give you an e.g. .but that's ok because GOD(the universe) was waiting
with open arms,you have finished your journey of life,you now sit with GOD(the universe) as he(it)
cleanses your soul,heart and feet,GOD(the universe) has put his hand over you and healed all
Just a suggestion...to reach more readers which I would love to see you do with your work. Humbly N.D.

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