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Crewel Lye
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 11:36:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I look out the window
and I sigh
as I think to myself
I'm moody and lonely
ever since you left,
you said you don't want me
you made that very clear....
I don't think you
ever really cared.
All the things we use to do
I now do with someone new
still everyday
I wish to be with you.
I can't think
I don't sleep
I don't know what to do....
all I want is you.
I now know the reasons
our love
could not survive
all the kisses and promises
were just an Illusion
a crewel lye,
the candle light's casting shadows
and a silent tear flows
as I
relive another painful memory,
I'm hurt
and I'm lonely
I never should have tried...
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
... [
2007-01-10 23:36:52]
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Re: Crewel Lye
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 12:12:23 AM AEST
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ALOT OF FEELING-& A GREAT WRITE! I ALSO THOUGHT HOW YOU SPELLED OUT THE TITLE WAS COOL-AN ATTENTION GETTER!!
DAN!!! |
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Re: Crewel Lye
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by Saloni on
Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 06:03:27 AM AEST
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brilliant! good read..
keep posting... |
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Re: Crewel Lye
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by Bleedthelove on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 11:14:15 AM AEST
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| Emotional piece. Nicely written. |
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Re: Crewel Lye
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 06:26:44 AM AEST
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So sad.
Cheer up, my friend as joy cometh in the morning.
Big huggs,
emy |
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