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Biological Heartbreak
Contributed by
Live2Die
on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 10:15:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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My body screams with heaving agony
As your sympathetic words float into my ears,
Sinking into my pores, becoming a flesh eating disease
That grapples with my white blood cells, victorious
Now crunching on the cell membranes of my heart
Desperate havoc is reaped within my physical skin
As my neurological senses pick up the tearing shriek of heart break
And begin to give up, brain cell by brain cell.
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Live2Die
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2007-01-10 22:15:34]
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Re: Biological Heartbreak
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 12:16:49 AM AEST
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DIFFERENT,BUT U-NEEK! SO WHAT I THING YOU'RE SAYING IS-LOVE CAN EAT YOU INSIDE & OUT!! INDEED IT CAN-COOL RIFF!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: Biological Heartbreak
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 06:48:13 AM AEST
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i like this.
the biological metaphors...
these type of abstractions are my favorite...
well done
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Re: Biological Heartbreak
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 10:18:43 AM AEST
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Gratefully we have billions of brain cells so it should take a while... in the mean-time keep your pen flowing these words have an effective metric and captures the 'break-down' beautifully.
Well Done
Peace
Yangdantien |
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