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Sad Song
Contributed by
crow
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Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 10:11:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I want to write a sad song
make everybody cry..
I want to write sad song
how the Cowboy rides away.
I want to make it lonely
someone" searching the moon,
I want to write forever"
and write.. it never" will come true...
I want to write a sad song
woman or a man..
put it in a dream i`ve had
give them both to you...
I want to write a sad song...Vincent
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crow
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2007-01-10 22:11:11]
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Re: Sad Song
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 10:24:25 AM AEST
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Ahhh Vincent..this felt so sad to me. There feels such a longing here. Something which you deeply want but cannot obtain. Short piece and to the point.
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Re: Sad Song
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 12:18:29 PM AEST
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this is such a powerful write.. it has a feeling of needing something or wanting that you can't quite get to.. I liked the stanzas and wording to this.. great job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Sad Song
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by shelby on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 03:19:38 PM AEST
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So sad for my mm. Whats up ey?
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Sad Song
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 09:11:46 PM AEST
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It sounds good loved the tune also
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Re: Sad Song
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 11:37:30 PM AEST
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So few words can say so much. Vincent this is so sad. I can feel your sadness & longing throughout this piece. May your heart never habour any sadness my dear friend. Sending you a rainbow of happiness to wash away your blues.
huge hugs,
sue m |
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