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Break Up
Contributed by
The_Unknown
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Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 09:53:23 PM in AEST
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I thaught he loved me
I thaught it was true
I really believed him
When he said, "I love you."
Thaught he ment it when he said I was his world
Turns out it was a lie
A lie he made everyone believe
At first he broke my heart
Then he tore it to pieces when he said he never loved me
He said it was all a lie
He said he loved someone else
This person whom he fell in love with
Is someone I thaught could be a friend
She stole his heart away
She had been using me all along
All she wanted was more people to like her
I don't blame her
But what she did was wrong
Turns out they both loved eachother
Turns out they were together before he broke my heart
But now that the tears are gone
All I have left for him is hate
I can't help but hate him
He has been a jerk
Ever sense they have been together
They both just might lose their friends
I hate him with a passion
This passion will never die
It makes me sad
That we have to be in this constant argument
But he won't stop
He keeps me going
Makes me feel bad about myself
Makes it seem I'm the bad one
But to think
He lied this whole time
Just because
I'm friends with his best friends girlfriend
That's what he said to me
He said he never loved me
After all this time
He finally said it
I don't think I could ever forgive him
So much to this argument
Almost hard to keep track of it all
It hurts
Even though I know I hate him
I hate him with a passion
I used to think I loved him
But once the tears are gone
All that's left is hate
And all of the facts
He wanted to be friends
I turned him down
I told him I didn't want to talk
Maybe it's all my fault
I'm just so confused anymore
I thaught he loved me
I thaught he cared
Now I can't even look at him without seeing her by his side
Can't stand to read his e-mails
All he writes about is hate
And talkes down to me
Tell's me I'm a demon
I found out so much stuff about him
After we'd broken up
About how he'd liked her all along
And everything like that
It makes me sick
For so long he lied to my face
Told me he loved me
Told me I was his world
This lie that he held out for so long
This lie that almost lasted a whole year
I hate him with a passion
This passion will never die
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The_Unknown
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2007-01-10 21:53:23]
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Re: Break Up
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 12:27:26 AM AEST
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IF YOUR HATE LAST HALF AS LONG AS THE LENGTH OF THIS POEM,HE'S GOT A LONG TIME IF YOU EVER FORGIVE HIM! I THINK IT SHOWS ALOT OF GUTS,TO EXPRESS THIS TO EVERYBODY!! SOUNDS LIKE HE LOST A VERY CARING & TALENTED PERSON,THAT SHOULD BE PUNISHMENT ENUFF!!! HOLD YOUR HEAD UP HIGH,YOU'VE GOT A HEART THAT REACHES OUT,AS THIS POEMS DOES SHOW-GREAT ONE TOO!!!!
DAN!!!!! |
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Re: Break Up
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 12:22:33 PM AEST
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wow this is a very emotionally sad and angry write.. I can understand how you feel.. your probably still hurting from all this .. it does take time to heal. but your friend wasn't really your friend either if she could even do that to you. they are not worth the pain and hurt but you will hurt for awhile.. but don't worry you will find someone right for you.. hang in there and keep your head high.. try not to let the anger consume within you.. because that can get overbearing.. trust me lolz I know.. I went through it.. its not worth keeping inner anger . they aren't worth that much.
beautiful sad write though
vampyress Jenni
hope things get better for you God bless |
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Re: Break Up
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by musicXisXlife on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 12:59:23 AM AEST
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| So spencer's pretty much an ass. The poem's great though. I love it. |
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