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i cant Help It....Can You?
Contributed by
crazyn
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Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 09:30:13 PM in AEST
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I can’t Help it….Can you?
A troubled soul can’t be compensated
A broken heart can’t be consolidated
A rich man can’t be ignored
A poor man can’t be recognised
A failure can’t be given an opportunity
A champion can't stop being proud
A wise man can’t be heard
A foolish man can’t be stopped from ruling
But all I know is a young man like me can’t be stopped from trying
And I can’t help it if I end up dying.
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Re: i cant Help It....Can You?
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by Saloni on
Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 06:47:51 AM AEST
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i must say ur poem is very emotional! good read.. excellent contrast and deep lines..
we can't help it.. all we could do is try....
there are always doors open when one is closed.. if you are troubled you could always find a way to solve your problems that doesn't mean harming yourself in any way.. if you want it your way you can make it your way involving compromising the situations and understanding at the same time.
i am impressed the way you wrote this poem.. its touched my heart..
its not always that a rich man can't be ignored.. it maybe a majority of times however the main point is the person itself how he is as a human.. money comes and goes.. money is not the issue as long as the person is ace within the heart..
poor people can be recognised.. just because they are poor that don't mean they are nothing... we are all humans at the end of the day.. money could be an issue to poor people however if they try to become something in their life they can gain respect and money enhance their life at the same time.
it depends what kind of failure it is.. i believe an failure can always be given an second opportunity as long as you can rely on them.. but then it is the person's decision whether to take further action or not.. you should never give up..
talking about dying.. there are two ways.. one you create a risk for yourself and follow your way to death's gate.. second is your destiny.. you gonna die when you are.. its all written.. you can't help it then.. if you chose the first path then i believe you can..
live your live till the end
don't give up on what you want to become and achieve..
may wrong path give you happiness but for how long?
lots of prayers for you.. |
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Re: i cant Help It....Can You?
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 01:08:04 PM AEST
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You did a great job expressing yourself and you have a right to believe what you want to and when you believe that you might be able to make a difference then go for it.. More power too you... Great poem..
Take care
Christina |
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