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Crystal Blue
Contributed by
Zajabalaj
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Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 08:36:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Ocean Deep and river wide
Waterfalls painted into a cliff
Spilling ever down, crystal blue
Creek gurgling and pond serene
Blue Heron stalks amongst the rushes
Fish jumps, breaking the crystal blue
Clouds rumble, lightning strikes
The heavens open up, poring down rain
Above the clouds, a plane of crystal blue
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2007-01-10 20:36:30]
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Re: Crystal Blue
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 09:25:55 PM AEST
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"Waterfalls painted into a cliff " is an excellent, strong image.
I usually don't like nature poetry, but enjoyed this as it painted a moment.
thanks,
larkspur. |
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Re: Crystal Blue
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by crazyn on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 09:34:39 PM AEST
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Short and sweet, striking and easily imaginable. if your poem was a painting that would make you Picasso!!
on a serious note this is the type of writing ability that makes an impact on people even though the words are simple.
well done.
Crazyn |
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Re: Crystal Blue
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 11:09:10 AM AEST
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I love nature and all her beauty. I find Mother Earth the most beautiful gem. You have written this very well. I'd say keep writing and I'll keep reading.
Peace, Laura |
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