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God's Storm
Contributed by
DrowningHeart
on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 02:27:40 PM in AEST
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A slowly creeping storm
of blowing, howling winds.
Where the thunder made no sound
Silence grew all around,
and the city slowly frowned
as the rain began to hit the ground.
Silence still remained.
Like a rod the lightning struck
Upon the heavens angels sung
away with suffering and pain
In heaven is where all we belong.
Evil spirits go away
one more chance for everyone
to live in harmony.
Still on earth we all betray
lies and deceit, on our shoulder weigh.
For our sins, we all will pay.
Forgive me lord
I have sinned
my prayers will not go ignored
this storm will slowly fade
I'll no longer be afraid.
Copyright ©
DrowningHeart
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2007-01-10 14:27:40]
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Re: God's Storm
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 07:57:56 PM AEST
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this is a beautiful write on God and i like the flow .. the ending makes it that much better awesome job
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Re: God's Storm
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 10:47:21 PM AEST
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| I like it for the content, I believe there is a better place, good work, good read. Crow |
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Re: God's Storm
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 06:50:55 PM AEST
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| pretty |
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