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The Glowing Goddess
Contributed by
clarity_rising
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Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 12:47:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The Sun is hidden, though her presence known,
Her rays seep through the compact clouds,
The light branches off in veridical lines-
Rising rays of gilded gold.
Land is only innocent in the purest light,
For this, Earth embraces her golden glow,
But when the Sun hides her flawless face
The earth is left to naught but cold.
But hark! Tender eyes from heaven!
Even the deepest valley is out of darkness…
The Sun has emerged from her ivory palace,
And casts her golden glow upon all the land.
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2007-01-10 12:47:41]
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Re: The Glowing Goddess
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by Muhammadshanazar on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 07:57:30 PM AEST
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Nice piece, the poetess talks of light, she is optimist in the world of thick dark clouds, the picture is very vivid, very beautiful imagery that the sun will rise from his ivory palace.
Take care, hugs
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Re: The Glowing Goddess
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by CDG on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 10:45:23 PM AEST
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| This has some great imagery. Very well written and very well described |
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Re: The Glowing Goddess
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 12:22:30 PM AEST
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vivid imagery good flow
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Re: The Glowing Goddess
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 02:05:58 PM AEST
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I'm liking your work - very well-worded, and it shows evidence of the influence of the poetry tradition, rather than being something which bows solely to the writer's needs. Good work.
Interestingly, though, the sun is usually referred to as a male in historic cultures.
Keep up the good work.
Andrew |
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Re: The Glowing Goddess
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 03:01:13 PM AEST
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And through her ivory palace the sun shall shine always~
Bravo dearest Clarity. Wow I absolutely love the imagery you cast into your readers head. You are a very talented poetess and your work is so inspiring. A wonderful delight to visit your pages again. Well done & take care.
May the sun always shine brightly for you~
warm hugs,
sue m |
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