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A Rule of Life
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 06:39:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Midnight sands, forgotten time
Life is there to create a rhyme
With my heart I will give
For those I care will live
From my action is true mean
Not done so I am seen
With one hand I offer true
I hope they love all I do
When time comes at last
Those I love will see their task
With their life they will give
To raise children to live
This the cycle of Gods love
A true gift from heaven above
From our children we will learn
Rules of life for which we earn.
Friday, 12 April 2002
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2007-01-10 06:39:32]
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Re: A Rule of Life
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 09:56:18 AM AEST
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this is a very wise and true piece.. i especially liked the beginning stanza and the last one. awesome job
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Re: A Rule of Life
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by SavagePoet on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 11:44:19 PM AEST
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| So true just so very true what a good understanding you have. Dude I think we are on the same wave length. Keep up the writing |
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