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Unwon Race
Contributed by
heba48
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Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 05:55:37 AM in AEST
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So beautiful and far fetched
The more we pursue it
The more tears we shed
It’s so tempting
It sparkles in front of our eyes
But the more we try to catch it
It flies
Being away from it means our peace of mind
Because we will never understand
How life can be so unkind
It’s our lost dreams
That get washed into the streams
And we sit there and weep
As our grief penetrates so deep
We wish we could have it all
But our dreams are not cheap
There is a price we have to pay
And accepting that life is not black and white
There is also a big part of grey!
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heba48
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2007-01-10 05:55:37]
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Re: Unwon Race
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by Kane on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 07:46:25 AM AEST
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Good mesage here, enjoyed the read.
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Re: Unwon Race
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by Muhammadshanazar on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 09:45:06 AM AEST
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Very deep poem, life is a race, the more we persue the more we are disturbed, and there is no end of it, at last the race takes us to the brim of the grave with empty hands and when we see behind nothing is there except the deserted road hazed by the tears in the eyes; very nice attempt my sister made; keep on, a nice work
love and respect
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Re: Unwon Race
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by Bleedthelove on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 11:20:45 AM AEST
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| Nicely written. I enjoyed reading this piece. |
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