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She Said My Dancing Was Like A Sex Appeal, She Wanted More (Acrostic)
Contributed by
SomeDude
on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 05:51:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Sheena I ask of you
How do bodies yet move and stood
Easily, but shares?
Stella I wait for you.
Altering to such and such.
In blue still stood
Divining another favor
Methods of self destruction
Ye {never} master plan
Dresses and fevers
And clouds and divas
Neither sane or same
Compare each other.
In or out
Neither any song written by a man
Glee, so much, they sing.
Whisper---------
--------Android
Slave----------
Likewise-------
Inks and
Karmas to entitled
Easters, likewise another circle
And…
‘Sirrah’ she said to him
Editing her skin with her paper map, modeling her
‘X’ to her paper world
And once again he felt for another girls tricks
Partaking her wishes
Painting his target towards her lips
Exalting her to his arms
And so…
Lacing his shoes as he gets comfortable…
Sheena, Stella
How they mocked me
Equally as they did with the one he, they call, ‘Sirrah’
Woman, oh woman
Attaching another ‘player’ closer to your pleasures-----
Nominating Those, alphabetically
Transmitting breakdowns to once blessings
Earthly, oh how they slowly evaporate, evenly----
Damned!
Maybe we’re amazed
Odd… faintly AMAZED
Raged and delusional by once desire
Equally another oomph comes our way.
Copyright ©
SomeDude
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2007-01-10 05:51:27]
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Re: She Said My Dancing Was Like A Sex Appeal, She Wanted More (Acrostic)
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by heba48 on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 05:58:28 AM AEST
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| mmmmm i enjoyed it. |
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Re: She Said My Dancing Was Like A Sex Appeal, She Wanted More (Acrostic)
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 06:43:48 AM AEST
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I Was lured by the title. Alas not my expectation yet I remain pleased to have read this.
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Re: She Said My Dancing Was Like A Sex Appeal, She Wanted More (Acrostic)
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by Kane on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 07:41:02 AM AEST
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An interesting write, a little stop and go from time to time, but interesting. well done.
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Re: She Said My Dancing Was Like A Sex Appeal, She Wanted More (Acrostic)
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by shelby on
Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 02:28:55 AM AEST
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Different style I found very interesting. I must read in through once more.
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