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Please
Contributed by
musicXisXlife
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Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 12:06:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i really don't know
if you believe me
and i dont blame you.
if i was you, i wouldn't believe me either.
but
im telling the truth
you gotta trust me
if you ever have, trust me now
because i need you
and i wouldn't lie to you
especially about something like this
and ive told you that
but i don't know if you're truly convinced
so im asking you, begging you
to make that leap of faith
and please, please believe me
because
i can't afford to lose you now.
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musicXisXlife
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2007-01-10 00:06:58]
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Re: Please
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 03:52:24 AM AEST
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this is like quite a heartfelt poem.I could really feel the urgency in which u needed the person to trust you.wish u luck.
cheers,
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Re: Please
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 10:10:11 AM AEST
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very emotional write.. you can feel the pain in this.. your pouring out your honesty to this person.. and your uncertain about how they feel on what you say.. great write
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Please
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by The_Unknown on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 11:02:01 PM AEST
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Hey babe!
GREAT WRITE!
I'm sure Eric believes you, well I know he dose. Plus I asked him if he did believe you and he's like, "yeah..." and blah blah blah.
Don't worry! It's all fine. He should believe you, cause I know you probably wouldn't ever do that... =/ Even though... nvm, I'll just tell you sometime else.
ANYways, great write!
-Jess |
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