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End
Contributed by
warrior143
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Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 09:34:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I want the end.
I had enough of everything.
The emptiness,
the sorrow,
the pain,
End, hello.
Friends, critics.
Family, don't see the inside me,
people, just don't see me.
Truth, i was born alone,
reality, i will die alone.
Last request, don't feel sorry for me, please.
End, hello.
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2007-01-09 21:34:31]
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Re: End
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by GAMEchief on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 09:39:32 PM AEST
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| I know someone who was going through something very similar. Please, think positively. There are many people that will be hurt by your leaving them. I know it can be hard, but I promise there are many things to live for. Time heals all wounds. |
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Re: End
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 10:16:19 AM AEST
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wow such a short powerful write.. you can feel the sadness. I could relate to this in my past.. but trust me here things always get better. give it time and patience.. always have hope.. there is something waiting for you that is wonderful.. a very beautifully sad write though
vampyress Jenni |
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