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A Bird's-eye View
Contributed by
yangdantien
on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 07:23:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Is it Cold?
Goose flesh signals
rushing water,
transparent blue,
green, brown & froth
into crystal lines
drawing rich secrets.
Bright pearls
rising from the deep,
quiet bubbles of
earths breath floating on
reflecting surfaces,
infinite glints,
depicting sky and
fingertips of breeze...
The stream views
eyes upon it
the delight of waters
ran and ran,
to air and rain
incessantly it runs
from mountain springs
changing the meaning
to teach
deep listening.
Everywhere at once
falls and rapids
the source and mouth,
seas and mountains dance,
as time shadows One
moment,
keys of the future
shinning in the past.
Our lives are kin
to everything in existence
glimpse this 'spacious present.'
Ecstasy and Awe
required.
To ease suffering
torrential time,
with heart,
press ears
to Mothers navel
as voices,
chuckling bursting
splashing, gurgling
humming this flow
of cosmic blood,
connects us each
by umbilical spirit,
To simply be in love...
With All and everything
held in highest regard
in wise bright esteem,
every second is precious,
with wit extended to
a 'wet' metaphor,
tippy-toe tested.
AJPIII
Copyright ©
yangdantien
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Re: A Bird's-eye View
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 07:54:22 PM AEST
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beautifully naturisitcally written.. well worded.. much truth in this.. nature is so pretty and you have captured nature into words.. enchanting
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Re: A Bird's-eye View
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 08:51:40 PM AEST
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A most beautiful work, delicate while intricate.
lovely writting.
Thank you for your coment.
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Re: A Bird's-eye View
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 09:10:51 PM AEST
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vivid in its beauty and wisdom
Shari |
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Re: A Bird's-eye View
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 09:52:28 PM AEST
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Dearest Aj,
your words are soothing to a soul, beautiful full of enlightenment and nature.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: A Bird's-eye View
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by MisfitMe on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 10:28:28 PM AEST
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You are truely fates serendipitous gift to me as through your words we met in the depths I call home...
Beyond words
~Kerry Lynne |
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Re: A Bird's-eye View
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 08:13:31 AM AEST
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You definately have the poets eye....and pen.
A unique and yet refreshing view! Thank you! |
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Re: A Bird's-eye View
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 10:54:03 AM AEST
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AJ, that was so fantastic of a nature write. My heart just swells with love for this wonderful place we call home. Her beauty leaves me in constant awe. It is wonderful to know others love her just as much. Great write, my brother.
*Hugs you all big like*
Peace, Laura |
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Re: A Bird's-eye View
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 11:44:26 AM AEST
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I am a great fan of your writes.
At times I dare not comment...
I find many things, useful to me within your words...they reinforce my own thoughts, at times...and they enchant and magnify each encounter and emotions you experience in this world and within your own.
Thank you for sharing them with us.
This piece is just...
Breath-taking! |
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Re: A Bird's-eye View
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 08:44:08 AM AEST
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Very beautiful.. Well expressed.. Very vivid in detail... I liked this a lot.. It was a really nice poem..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: A Bird's-eye View
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 04:30:53 PM AEST
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This is 'bout as close to mastery as a piece can be. So enjoyable to read 'n' ponder and so vividly laid out ya gotta feel gittin' wet! Magnificent work, my friend. Keep yer ear to Mother's navel 'n' don't venture too far that ya break that umbilical spirit. Please. Just write more about it!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: A Bird's-eye View
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by Alex23 on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 01:15:38 AM AEST
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| Awesome description of the subtleness and beauty of nature. Great write!! |
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Re: A Bird's-eye View
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by MisfitMe on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 08:17:34 PM AEST
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As I have returned to enjoy this again...you deserve to know of my appreciation again.
Beautiful!
~Me |
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Re: A Bird's-eye View
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by Clarity_Rising on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 10:48:21 AM AEST
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This poem leaves me breathless.
I love the way you describe things,
it paints a very vivid picture in my
mind. These lines:
Our lives are kin
to everything in existence
glimpse this 'spacious present.'
Ecstasy and Awe
required.
Really stuck with me. Simply beautiful.
You have quite the talent!
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Re: A Bird's-eye View
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 01:52:10 PM AEST
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i love this, beautiful imagery
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Re: A Bird's-eye View
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 05:26:51 PM AEST
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love your style here, beautiful write
love n' hugs nessa
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