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Lucid
Contributed by
pineapple47
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Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 01:27:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I just reached the end
I saw the light coming from a mile away
I knew how it felt before the physical
I gave in before I was begged
I held the hand of my angel of love
And held out my hand to the angel of death
I closed my eyes to avoid the sight
And opened them with tears in my eyes
This new years been started right
Im alive
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pineapple47
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2007-01-09 13:27:20]
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Re: Lucid
(User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 07:30:11 PM AEST
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and like a bicycle you never loose it...
Good Job
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Re: Lucid
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by Alex23 on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 08:17:37 PM AEST
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| Great way to start the year off. Short and sweet. Great job. |
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