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would you
Contributed by
Sparkz16
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Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 09:58:31 AM in AEST
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If i was falling would you catch me?
If i was losing my grip would you hold me tighter?
If i were to tell you i wanted to run away, would you run-away with me?
If i wanted to lay in the grass and get lost in the stars would you get lost with me?
If nothing lasts forever, can i be your nothing?
If we can't keep this going.
Than why do you??
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Re: would you
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by EddieDean on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 02:45:18 PM AEST
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wow, such a great poem! its so beautiful and brief, but i love it!
great work!
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Re: would you
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by trackiller2006 on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 04:22:39 PM AEST
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Very nice! I love the "If nothing lasts forever, can i be your nothing?" Keep it up!!
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