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Break My Dream
Contributed by
mazeof_darkness
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Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 11:28:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I've tried to fight it....... can't believe.
The very thing that restored some of my confidence,
could break my dream.
I thought I was finally getting it,
but like every other time........
You chose to be the one to shoot me down,
my life in rewind.
I don't belong here anyway,
never did you see?
For I'm far better than this........
and I don't care if you don't believe.
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mazeof_darkness
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2007-01-08 23:28:58]
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Re: Break My Dream
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 10:06:19 PM AEST
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This is true poetry, and even more true life.I enjoyed reading this, you write well.
Thank you for your comment also.
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Re: Break My Dream
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by shelby on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 03:13:21 PM AEST
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You said this point on.. Yes how it is poetic and like Ben said so true to life you hit it with this one......
is a lonely road to travel when you find this lesson out at times indeed..
lovely write
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Re: Break My Dream
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by Dom on
Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 01:10:12 AM AEST
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I like the strength you show in this poem, a strength that shines through the difficulties and keeps you going.
Great rhythm also, the words flow effortlessly.
Take care,
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