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Hearts' Embrace
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 10:05:30 PM in AEST
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I want the world to stop today.
I close my eyes and pray--
(that the pain all goes away,)
and that these feelings will not fill my bones,
and make me feel so all alone and helpless down inside myself...
For I can't take this anymore,
this feeling that I've fought before...
...It's killing me...
And now, a voice is crying out,
to someone that I used to be,
to find that speck of strength I had,
that long ago, empowered me,
and learn to tame its hearty flare,
lest I cause harm in my haste
and find the calm to make a choice,
between the hearts' embrace
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Re: Hearts' Embrace
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 05:52:01 AM AEST
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I love the format!
Such feeling! You grow more and more with each piece. Maturing.
More! |
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Re: Hearts' Embrace
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 11:27:23 AM AEST
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Oh my Phil....Such a good write. So good. Deeply emotive. I simply was captured by that ending stanza. Knowing you, it hurts me so that you feel this way, but I am glad you can release it with your words. Love ya hun.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Hearts' Embrace
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 01:22:37 PM AEST
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wow this is very beautiful and heart felt. so full of emotions.. I love the way you worded it and formatted this.. glad to see you writing again.. sounds like something is bugging you.. maybe you need whats the word i'm looking for that fire within to give you strength.. always be you.. never lose your real self either.. your a wonderful person philly and have a beautiful heart never change..
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Re: Hearts' Embrace
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by books_4gal on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 05:57:59 PM AEST
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| Great write! Felt like i was eavesdropping on someone's private thoughts, you've expressed the emotion so real it took away my breath. Thanks for daring to share. |
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Re: Hearts' Embrace
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 07:07:17 PM AEST
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hugssss for you hun.
This is emotional I could feel your heart.
You are talented and I am so happy to see that you are posting! More please???
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Hearts' Embrace
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 07:58:24 PM AEST
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I agree we are privy here to the dialogue and workings between heart and mind... Bravo.
Here's to the courage of your pen!
May the Calm, Attend and Embrace you Fully...
Peace
AJ |
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Re: Hearts' Embrace
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 04:52:35 AM AEST
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Sweetie, this is incredibly moving, in a very sad way. What an unimaginable
and altogether beautiful title. The last line speaks so softly and yet with a
conviction of thought that is amazingly powerful. I actually find strength
in this piece that floats just within reach. And oh! how I relate to it.
Perfectly worded and expressed hun. Inner struggle can be and is
devastating at times. But with friends to lean on, there is much
to relish in the discovery of strength!
Wonderful post, my dear poet and friend.
~ Breezy
(thanks for the chat this morning-- and for the
list! ;) Hope you came up with a thirteenth! lol ) |
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Re: Hearts' Embrace
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 25th August 2010 @ 06:27:26 PM AEST
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You have an astoundingly good choice of words. I loved the line -that these feeling will not fill my bones- That's how deep you're opening yourself up in writing this, to the bone. It's very rare that we get words like empowered, and not have them bog down the reading of the poem. Very good.
Take care,
David |
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Re: Hearts' Embrace
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd May 2014 @ 04:32:44 PM AEST
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so beautifully heartfelt, there's a piece of your
soul in this one,
hugs n' love nessa
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