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Fire and Ice
Contributed by
heba48
on
Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 02:23:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When it’s quiet
And all have slept
I start thinking of you
Of everything we did together
How beautiful life was
How much I enjoyed every touch
Every smile
I wanted time to stop
I wanted to stay there
Only with you
And for you
But fire became ice
And sweet became sour
And joy became sadness
And I want to get away
From you!
Copyright ©
heba48
... [
2007-01-08 14:23:46]
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Re: Fire and Ice
(User Rating: 1 )
by trini on
Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 06:44:33 PM AEST
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A very dynamic poem here. i liked it. good job
Keep up the good work!
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Re: Fire and Ice
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by Muhammadshanazar on
Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 08:09:27 PM AEST
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A nice piece that depicts how the feelings have changed and the poetess wants to live in the sweet memoroies of the past, but time has to go ahead and the mind has to retain the memories whether they are sweet or bitter, we have to live with them; we wish or not, this is the essence of life. Take Care, you are a promising poetess.
Love, hugs and peace
Muhammad Shanazar |
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Re: Fire and Ice
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by Zajabalaj on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 08:22:45 PM AEST
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| Very well written, a poem i think most of us can say we've experienced! I currently am, infact haha.... Keep up the good work, a very lovely piece of art |
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