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Goodluck Charm
Contributed by
Damien
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Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 11:40:00 AM in AEST
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The day the Gypsy gave me the goodluck charm,
she said " wear this or you'll die in your own arms"
I like a fool believed it and wore it for quite a while,
finally I said " forget it,when I die,I'll die with a smile"
One day I woke up only to find myself in a hot desert,
on a dry river bed,being watched by an overhead buzzard,
as I tried to get up and run for my life,
I saw a shadow and in it's hand a knife.
In fear and in panic,I reached for my goodluck charm,
and when it was'nt there I withdrew my hand in alarm.
I jumped out of bed with a wild scream,
realising that it was just a dream,
But I still wanted to find that charm and wear it,
I wanted to make sure that I would never loose it,
as I searched for it I slipped and fell,
and found myself alone at the gates of hell.
So I proved right what the gypsy had foretold,
as I died with no one but myself to hold.
Copyright ©
Damien
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2003-02-20 11:40:00]
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Re: Goodluck Charm
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 11:48:23 AM AEST
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| interesting, intriguing, eerie little poem... wonderful! |
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Re: Goodluck Charm
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 03:25:44 PM AEST
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| a very good little story. Ivy |
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Re: Goodluck Charm
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 03:38:19 PM AEST
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| Thanks a lot , I doubt wether I could do all this without your encouragement- Damien |
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