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Wings Of Desire
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 05:11:41 AM in AEST
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I often dream
at night
that I can fly...
with angels
on wings of desire,
way up high
in the sky.
There are moments
when I frown
but then
I slowly start to smile
as Something sweet
drops
into my mind.
My lover took me deep
never knowing
a virgin died...
the memory
still has me on fire,
gotta secret addiction to desire.
Life is just a movie
and sometimes
I forget my lines
as moments
become memories in my mind,
mentally I'm melting
and all I can do is smile.
Love to slowly tease
and freeze it
when that moment arrives...
ooh
when desire
is on
FIRE.
Melting into a dream
is so sweet
the sensations get me high
way up high
where angels fly.
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
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2007-01-08 05:11:41]
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Re: Wings Of Desire
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 01:41:30 PM AEST
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very alluring poem.. it keeps you intrigued.. I like the flow of this and the wording is so electrifying..
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Re: Wings Of Desire
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 02:15:58 PM AEST
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| great poem! |
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Re: Wings Of Desire
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 03:00:54 PM AEST
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Such excellent presentation could lead one to quote a popular song, "Give Me Wings!" I agree with vampyress jenni, this is a whimsically alluring piece of perfection in creating a [what gets you high] tease. Tip o' my hat to ya. Also that flow o' yers flows as good as it gits, even with those one word thought lines.
wabl
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Re: Wings Of Desire
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 07:05:42 PM AEST
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W0oo Tony,
Maybe I'll meet cha some nite. Big smile.
Good to see you feeling better, my dear friend.
Incredible writing as always.
Big huggs,
emy |
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