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When Your Heart is an Eight Ball
Contributed by
yackerz85
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Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 07:14:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Take me for a spin to find your desired answer.
because you can't judge me from face value.
Your luck may not be good but still take a chance
because with me feelings seem to never last.
but if you shake me oh just right
I might just give you what you want
it might be your lucky night tonight
just try me and you'll see...
When your heart is an eight ball,
you never know for who you'll fall
love is just a game based on chance.
and lasts no longer than a quick glance.
"Yes", "No", "Maybe", and "wait and see"
I'm never sure what the result may be
I know its a gamble but the cost is free.
its the chance you take to go out with me
The heart is a fickle thing constantly changing
as it rises and it falls but never stays true.
One moment its "Yes" and in another its "No"
resembling a black ball with the number eight.
my love is just a shake away
just ask me and I'll tell you
It can be fun if you want to play
but this eight ball has no regrets.
When your heart is an eight ball,
you never know for who you'll fall
love is just a game based on chance.
and lasts no longer than a quick glance.
"Yes", "No" "Maybe" and "wait and see"
I'm never sure what the result may be
I know its a gamble but the cost is free.
its the chance you take to go out with me
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yackerz85
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2007-01-07 19:14:49]
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Re: When Your Heart is an Eight Ball
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 01:56:34 PM AEST
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this is a very creative approach to the emotion love.. i think its rather creative and well worded..
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Re: When Your Heart is an Eight Ball
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by trini on
Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 06:34:46 PM AEST
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I agree with PhantomVampyress
very creative indeed. no regrets is a good way to look at it. i liked the poem
keep up the good work
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Re: When Your Heart is an Eight Ball
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by a_bit_naieve on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 09:03:35 PM AEST
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I like this one best...well, second best...
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