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My Fantasy In Reality's Perspective
Contributed by
CuriousitysCat
on
Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 06:45:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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What am I to think when
A man in the tree starts
Talking to me?
He's singing a song who's
Vocalist reminds me of
The cause for trouble
In paradise
She's insane
And so while I'm being serenaded
By treeman insane vocalist
And thoughts of the unstable woman
I slip into my
Place of thought
To be bitten by guilt
And formulate my gratefulness
And being vocal is me
But I keep in mind
To passively observe is
To learn a lot
The wisdom touches me
At the most unoften moments
In time
But for now I sit and sip
At the cup of knowledge
As others teach me
What it is
To feel...
~ThEnD
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CuriousitysCat
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2007-01-07 18:45:38]
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Re: My Fantasy In Reality's Perspective
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by MisfitMe on
Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 06:55:25 PM AEST
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Trees have such real voices that it's near impossible to not find faces in them...
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: My Fantasy In Reality's Perspective
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by trixxx on
Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 08:17:03 AM AEST
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Great poem, I think I share these feeling sometimes
I've always held as a saying:
'A vivid imagination is the most reliable friend you can have' |
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Re: My Fantasy In Reality's Perspective
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 09:54:00 AM AEST
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I love how a poem reveals the writers character and upbringing :)
"...I slip into my
Place of thought
To be bitten by guilt
And formulate my gratefulness..."
A Toast to the Next One Hundred Years as you... :)
"...sit and sip
At the cup of knowledge..."
Here's to your parents and the good moral fiber in you as we all learn to do & feel by the other's example...
Thank You
Good Job
Peace
Yang |
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Re: My Fantasy In Reality's Perspective
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 04:11:19 PM AEST
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| nicly done, the title really caught my eye because the Boom Boom Satalites had a trak on one of their CDs with the lyrics "Your fantasy's a reality but your reality is killing me" |
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Re: My Fantasy In Reality's Perspective
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by Clarity_Rising on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 11:36:44 PM AEST
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I really liked your use of metaphors in this poem.
Your choice of scenery and characters are
very original. These lines have really captured
my attention:
“But for now I sit and sip
At the cup of knowledge”
Great work!
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Re: My Fantasy In Reality's Perspective
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by JohnRhinem on
Saturday, 9th August 2014 @ 05:39:34 PM AEST
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| I love your name, baby girl! |*:*(*{{.....Keep sipping as brushing, Tinkerbell! |
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