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Tide Beating Hearts
Contributed by
drowningheart
on
Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 09:02:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Set sail on
a romantic voyage
to a never ending trip.
On a ship
made out of wood
destruct nor wind
or water could.
Life on board
of tide beating hearts
A rocking ship
the ocean's mist
A love grew deeper
between shipkeepers.
To waters deep
and oceans blue
upon this ship
carries no crew
only a captain
and his first mate
not lovers
but soulmates.
Copyright ©
drowningheart
... [
2007-01-07 09:02:09]
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Re: Tide Beating Hearts
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by Crow on
Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 12:21:55 PM AEST
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| Isn`t this just perfect..great work. Crow |
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Re: Tide Beating Hearts
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 02:00:04 PM AEST
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wow i Love the approach you took on this poem.. its very creative great job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Tide Beating Hearts
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by Clarity_Rising on
Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 02:19:34 PM AEST
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| Often the symbol of sailing is used to describe turbulent and unrequited love. I enjoyed your creative approach, by making the ship appear peaceful, enduring, and eternal. These lines “only a captain and his first mate not lovers but soulmates,” really captivated me. It was very touching, and left me feeling content. Great work! |
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Re: Tide Beating Hearts
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by Bleedthelove on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 06:52:34 PM AEST
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| Very creative. Nice job. |
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Re: Tide Beating Hearts
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by AirHead on
Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 12:56:04 PM AEST
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| Again a fantastic write, I love your work.... |
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