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Overload Of Perfection;

Contributed by xDiSaStErPiEcEx on Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 12:12:35 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

oh darling stare at me with your eyes of want, lust, love.
i feel your desire burning through me with love, lust, and want.
and these little things we do, nothing close to the real thing, sufficient, i suppose.
but overall, compared to, these little things are a mere taunt.
but baby we don't have to, if you don't want to, i know you want to.
your words pour out, your words are an ocean, i'm falling in, drowning.
i can swim, but you're too strong, too amazing, overload of perfectness.
perfect as a prince, a princess in need, is this your final crowning?
as i stare at the reflection, it's there, i'm looking, but just not seeing.
words repeating through my mind, i feel you by me, arm around me, you're here, you are.! but where....?
i look, open my eyes, turn around, but no. no one's there. here, i am alone.
longing to hear the words you say with such a want, lust, love, that you love me, that you care.
you're all i can think about, one thing, leads to another, to another, then back to you.
tell me if you feel the same, baby, do you? these feelings, in word-form, is that how your ocean would spill?
babe you know you can save me, from your words like an ocean, so deep, bail me out.
overload of perfectness, i can't take in these words, these words, are the kill.
and the weapon of choice, "i love you", a cheapshot, a sign of cheating.
but baby all i hear is the "i love you". all i feel, is the weapon, the love, the murder, the pain.
walking so slowly, hand in hand, forgetting the world in each step.
and all is forgotten, misunderstood, not cared for, lost, with a kiss, so softly, in the rain.
though those words, like an ocean, crashing over me in a wave, catching a shell scratched with your love, your killing me.
but baby i hold on, we hold on, we last, forever, for as long as we possibly can, until i drown, completely.
in your love, i am lost, in your overload of perfection, perception, your cheating, your cheapshots, i love it all.
and with every single stab, from your weapon of choice, i listen each time more carefully, because each time, your killing me, so sweetly.
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Copyright © xDiSaStErPiEcEx ... [ 2007-01-06 12:12:35]
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Re: Overload Of Perfection; (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 04:46:15 PM AEST
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my lovely kylee -

you've become...quite a poet while i wasn't looking. keep it up...i lovelovelove it!

- Bethani -

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