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Our Dreamworld
Contributed by
xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
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Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 05:20:12 PM in AEST
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Looking and seeing:
We are looking at the world
but can we actually see what is going on?
Hearing and listening:
We are hearing the voices
but do we actually listen to what is being said?
Talking and speaking:
We like to talk about little stuff
but do we have the courage to speak the truth?
Remarks and comments:
We easily make remarks
but the right comments made count in the end.
Sleeping and dreaming:
We are sleeping deeply
and dreaming of a better world.
When do we wake up from our dreaming world
and actually see the world for what it is,
listen to the words spoken, speak the truth to one another
and make rightful comments that matter.
Our dreamworld start with ourselves.
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Re: Our Dreamworld
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 05:32:14 PM AEST
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Your wisdom and heart shine in your poetic words.
Very well done once again
Roses
Larry
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Re: Our Dreamworld
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by Soccerflyer27 on
Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 05:37:12 PM AEST
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| This is true for any human being on this Earth. Very little people actually listen and see and speak from the heart. We think that way, but we need people like you and poems like this to remind us to actually do it. Job well done. |
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Re: Our Dreamworld
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by Muhammadshanazar on
Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 06:07:35 AM AEST
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The poetess has in this poemlaid stress callousness of the people, we are dumb, and deaf, the world needs dynamic characters at present situation to rectify it, we should not point towards others weaknesses but should commence the task of reformation from ourself individually. A great job, I love it.
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Re: Our Dreamworld
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 10:05:53 AM AEST
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Nats, You have written many truths here. The last line is stinging. Well done.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Our Dreamworld
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 02:22:01 AM AEST
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As ever, you have come up with a well crafted and though provoking piece here nats.
The last line is especially poignant,
Great work
Steve |
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