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To L
Contributed by
trueecho
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Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 12:47:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Do you ever think of our friendship?
The good times
Before my carelessness hurt you
And you stopped caring that hurt me
It died in a Nevada hotel room
I have better friends now
Friends I owe my life to
But I miss him
Will you ever forgive me?
Can I forgive myself?
Goodbye was too easy
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trueecho
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2007-01-05 12:47:31]
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Re: To L
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 05:16:20 PM AEST
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That is some emotionally powerful writing my friend.
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: To L
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by Clarity_Rising on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 01:33:37 PM AEST
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Bittersweet sadness. The loss
of a friend or lover can be so
painful. My hope is that time
shall bring you back together
once more. Lovely write!
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Re: To L
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by darcy5450 on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 08:23:48 AM AEST
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| Your poems are so well written. I wonder how many of them are true life and how many are made up. They all sound real though so I guess that's the point...well done! |
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Re: To L
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 12:55:53 PM AEST
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wow that is a very poweful and emotional write . I enjoyed this piece great job
vampyress Jenni |
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