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The White Witch of the Winter Waters
Contributed by
topcatcrowther
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Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 07:02:47 AM in AEST
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Lady of the lake,
I see you in winter waters,
Mist gently drapes an angelic beauty,
Your fine curls decorate your brow,
And the sparkle in your eyes overwhelm my humbled heart,
As evening sun pierces willowy trees,
Radiant Guardian,
She Glide to the waters edge,
As leaves stop to fall around her,
No ripple disturbs,
Mysterious lady,
Graceful ballerina of the woods,
No bird is heard,
No creature stirs,
For nothing could disturb such enchantment,
She comes to immerse me in her lagoon,
Her eyes lure me in,
As if a noose is set around my neck,
Pulls me in,
Into her magical spell,
White Witch of the waters,
I am yours.
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Re: The White Witch of the Winter Waters
(User Rating: 1 ) by AliB on
Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 08:46:27 AM AEST (User
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Wow, I absolutely love this!!
I haven't commented on any poetry here for months but you have changed this. Your alliterative title drew me in, and I'm glad the poem continued my interest until the end. Very descriptive, makes me want to start writing again.
Well done,
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